Gratitude Awakens
A Five Line Tribute to Gratitude
The ups and downs, petty rigours, and busyness of life make Gratitude difficult to celebrate. But thankfulness manifests more to be grateful for.
So we embrace it, with the help of our five senses. Hereβs a 5-line tribute to the Universe for what we have.
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Dawnβs gentle breath pulls me from nightβs shell,
The scent of dew-drenched earth brings life afresh.
A flash of warmth laces with my fingertips,
Whispers of morning reside on Silencesβ border,
The sweetness of the wind, Gratitudeβs vow kept.
About the Creator
Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

Comments (6)
This is a really nice tribute to nature and the senses.
wonderful way to awaken
Oh this was so beautiful! Loved it so much!
Gorgeous work!!
Superbly penned!!! Love it!!!β€οΈβ€οΈπ
Profound and beautiful, but the extra βofβ in the last line throws it off the rhythm a little.