Happy Heavenly Birthday To My Baby Boy
The Unnecessary Line Challenge

we lost you eleven years ago, March 24, 2015, at 11:20 pm eastern standard time
this poem doesn't have to rhyme
you were always so very kind
Happy Heavenly Birthday to my baby boy
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if you happen to be looking down
if you happen to be looking around
if you see the bleak picture that you found
Happy Heavenly Birthday to my baby boy
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I don't know why he took your life from you that night
things have not improved since he put out your bright light
things have gotten worse in the world despite God's might
Happy Heavenly Birthday to my baby boy
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if you could see what was going on below
if you could see what all it shows
you would see a world at odds with all its foes
Happy Heavenly Birthday to my Baby Boy
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the garden is full of seeds that are suppose to grow
you stood for courage, you fought in a war
you fought for a child, that wasn't yours
because you felt she needed you more
Happy Heavenly Birthday to my Baby Boy
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but today that child turned their back on your memories
does genetics play a part of everyone's legacy
if I could turn back the clock, would you still be here today
Happy Heavenly Birthday to my Baby Boy
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to your resting place no one else goes
but I wonder if you are looking down and see we always show
putting flowers on your grave, I wonder if your heavenly father knows
Happy Heavenly Birthday to my Baby Boy
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I miss you, you were my very best friend
I wonder if murder had not intervened, just how it would end
To heaven I will send
HAPPY HEAVENLY BIRTHDAY TO MY BABY BOY
This is dedicated to my son Richard L Jacobs Jr.
Until we meet again, I loved you while you were on this earth, and I will love you beyond this lifetime................until we meet again ..............
HAPPY BIRTHDAY RICKY!!!
About the Creator
Susan Payton
I love to write in every venue. I am 75 years old and try to make every day count,. I am learning a great deal about poetry on Vocal, and I am glad to be here.


Comments (5)
This is a loving tribute. May he rest in peace, and may you find peace wherever you roam.
My heart breaks for you. Your son had a wonderful smile and this is a beautiful tribute to him.
Hugs, Susan.
This was such a beautiful tribute to Richard. Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️
So heartbreaking and beautiful, Susan. I'm sorry for your loss and I know the heart never really heals from the loss of the child. Until you meet again...