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Happy Heavenly Birthday To My Baby Boy

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By Susan PaytonPublished a day ago Updated about 24 hours ago 1 min read
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we lost you eleven years ago, March 24, 2015, at 11:20 pm eastern standard time

this poem doesn't have to rhyme

you were always so very kind

Happy Heavenly Birthday to my baby boy

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if you happen to be looking down

if you happen to be looking around

if you see the bleak picture that you found

Happy Heavenly Birthday to my baby boy

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I don't know why he took your life from you that night

things have not improved since he put out your bright light

things have gotten worse in the world despite God's might

Happy Heavenly Birthday to my baby boy

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if you could see what was going on below

if you could see what all it shows

you would see a world at odds with all its foes

Happy Heavenly Birthday to my Baby Boy

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the garden is full of seeds that are suppose to grow

you stood for courage, you fought in a war

you fought for a child, that wasn't yours

because you felt she needed you more

Happy Heavenly Birthday to my Baby Boy

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but today that child turned their back on your memories

does genetics play a part of everyone's legacy

if I could turn back the clock, would you still be here today

Happy Heavenly Birthday to my Baby Boy

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to your resting place no one else goes

but I wonder if you are looking down and see we always show

putting flowers on your grave, I wonder if your heavenly father knows

Happy Heavenly Birthday to my Baby Boy

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I miss you, you were my very best friend

I wonder if murder had not intervened, just how it would end

To heaven I will send

HAPPY HEAVENLY BIRTHDAY TO MY BABY BOY

This is dedicated to my son Richard L Jacobs Jr.

Until we meet again, I loved you while you were on this earth, and I will love you beyond this lifetime................until we meet again ..............

HAPPY BIRTHDAY RICKY!!!

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About the Creator

Susan Payton

I love to write in every venue. I am 75 years old and try to make every day count,. I am learning a great deal about poetry on Vocal, and I am glad to be here.

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  • Julie Lacksonenabout 6 hours ago

    This is a loving tribute. May he rest in peace, and may you find peace wherever you roam.

  • A. J. Schoenfeldabout 19 hours ago

    My heart breaks for you. Your son had a wonderful smile and this is a beautiful tribute to him.

  • Shirley Belkabout 20 hours ago

    Hugs, Susan.

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout 22 hours ago

    This was such a beautiful tribute to Richard. Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️

  • Lana V Lynxa day ago

    So heartbreaking and beautiful, Susan. I'm sorry for your loss and I know the heart never really heals from the loss of the child. Until you meet again...

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