Irresistible?
Love in 50 Words challenge
Whatās Love?
Loveā¦ is caramel coloured puppy dog eyes
gazing in limpid adoration
their focal pointā¦ sublimely oblivious.
Loveā¦ is zany āZoomiesā careening crazily
while the Loved One languidly lolls
leaning against a fence.
Loveā¦ is fizzing feelings,
or more subtly revealing.
True, steadfastā¦ today, tomorrow and in the past.
About the Creator
Angie the Archivist ššŖ¶
Labradorās personalityšāš¦ŗā¦ attention span of a gnat! š
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I echo Susan. Doggy love is the greatest love there is. And the most sincere there is!
The greatest love there is. - PUPPY LOVE - Nicely Done!!!
Shaun said it so well! Purest puppy love, indeed! Great take on the challenge, Angie!
Awww, an ode to āpuppyā love. Super sweet!
This has a delightful spark and energy , Angie. Itās contemplative, a little frenetic and brimming with joy! Loved it! Good luck on the challenge!
Summed love up in these lines: "Loveā¦ is caramel coloured puppy dog eyes gazing in limpid adoration" There is nothing like the love of a dog. It is unconditional.
Now this is the purest for of love. Loved your poem!
Oh, I love this, Angie! Beautiful
A different but honest kind of love. Great piece!