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Lake Phantasmagorical

A haiku chain poem about my ex-friend

By Talia DevoraPublished about a year ago โ€ข 1 min read
Lake  Phantasmagorical
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Lake attireโ€™s on

canoe and paddles ready

bon voyage buddy!

๐Ÿšฃ๐Ÿšฃ๐Ÿšฃ๐Ÿšฃ๐Ÿšฃ

The golden sun hides

whipped cream clouds fly like pigeons

a quiet foggy Sunday.

๐ŸŒซ๏ธ๐ŸŒซ๏ธ๐ŸŒซ๏ธ๐ŸŒซ๏ธ๐ŸŒซ๏ธ

Iโ€™m floating away

driving on opaque water

I am almost home!

๐Ÿ’ฆ๐Ÿ’ฆ๐Ÿ’ฆ๐Ÿ’ฆ๐Ÿ’ฆ

Deafening surges

a call to arrive faster

natureโ€™s alarm clock.

๐ŸŒŠ๐ŸŒŠ๐ŸŒŠ๐ŸŒŠ๐ŸŒŠ

Outside worldโ€™s toxic

island life is fulfilling

my permanent home.

๐Ÿ๏ธ๐Ÿ๏ธ๐Ÿ๏ธ๐Ÿ๏ธ๐Ÿ๏ธ

My way is the best

you are too realistic

I canโ€™t allow it!

๐Ÿ›ถ๐Ÿ›ถ๐Ÿ›ถ๐Ÿ›ถ๐Ÿ›ถ

The truth is mundane

cock and bull stories are fun

that is why I fib!

๐Ÿคฅ๐Ÿคฅ๐Ÿคฅ๐Ÿคฅ๐Ÿคฅ

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Talia Devora

Poetess, entrepreneur, visual artist, DIY lover, recreation and leisure enthusiast, history buff, and a foreign language addict!

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  • Canuck Scriber Lisa Lachapelleabout a year ago

    That's an awesome poem!

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    Sweet, surreal, sassy and sentimental. Beautiful work โค๏ธ

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Awesome!!! Loved it!!!โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’•

  • Losing friends is not nice but your words are excellent

  • Tiffany Gordonabout a year ago

    Phenomenal job Talia! Thx 4 sharing!

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