Sunbreak,
brilliant blue
supplants the dark.
Smoky stratus wisps trail
and sketch the atmosphere,
Nature’s skyward spoor.
Copyright © 8/2/2024 by Andrea O. Corwin
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Congratulations 👏🏻🎉
Great job!
Lovely poem, congratulations on top story.
Beautiful nature poetry congratulations on top story.
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Beautifully painted visual! Congrats, Andrea!
That was lovely❤️ Congratulations on Top Story 👏
"Nature's skyward spoor" is an especially evocative metaphor!
WOW. I absolutely love this- brilliant choices of words and metaphors, the scene truly comes alive in one's mind's eye. Congrats - if this wasn't worthy of a Top Story, nothing could be! :)
Beautiful and well written!
How beautiful - such vivid imagery evoked by your choice in words! Congratulations on top story.
Just pretty and beautiful, well done on a fine Top Story, Andrea!
I love the cloud descriptions too, Andrea.
"Nature's skyward spoor" - gorgeous line! I was talking with someone about cloud formations the other day ☺
Beautiful photo and poem!
So lovely! What a delightful read!
And is quelled again come night.
Oooo, I learned a new word today, supplant! Your poem was so beautiful!
Brilliant blue, like you said! Gosh the sky can be so beautiful! 🥰🥰 Love your poem!
Ah, beautiful!
What a way to describe a sunrise. Love the image you chose.
Lovely, Andrea.