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The bats in the sky and I

silent observation in the night

By Salomé SaffiriPublished 11 months ago Updated 11 months ago 1 min read

A dusted blue indigo sunset

A bat in the sky and I.

First hefty spring bug

Rises from the grass-

Slowly, drowsily.

Bouncing in the balmy air.

The wind-combed winter grass

Became the blonde straw.

Two bats in the sky and I.

The sinking Sun paints "Goodbye"

With a scattered stroke of a cloud.

Three bats in the sky and I.

Two circling each other.

A dragonfly, so close to my face-

Will the bats see it?

Four ducks carry their song South.

A paintbrush,

Dipped into the velvety darkness

Of the forthcoming night,

Spilled four inky drops

Onto the young canvass of the spring sky.

Four bats in the sky and I.

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About the Creator

Salomé Saffiri

Writing - is my purpose. I feel elated when my thoughts assume shapes, and turn into Timberwolves, running through the snowbound planes of fresh paper, leaving the black ink of their paw prints behind.

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  • John Cox11 months ago

    I love the rhythm and the quiet your poem evokes, Salome! Beautiful poetry!

  • Jay Kantor11 months ago

    Hi - SS - Once again very interesting as to how your Pen Bops around — So sorry that you may have thought I’ve overstepped— I had no intention to promote myself—Just thought you may enjoy some of my ‘Shorts’ ✍️— I will delete this in a few minutes as to keep it private..! Luck with your 📕 Book project! -J-

  • Marie381Uk 11 months ago

    Wonderful poetry ♦️🌺♦️

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