The Black Phone
A Horror(ble) Senryu
Haunted phone helps boy...
"Everything's better on weed!"
Ask David Chappelle!
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A/N: It actually wasn't a bad movie. Horror flicks in general get a thumbs down before they are even given a chance play morbid tricks on the mind. I'm happy to report that this one turned the thumbs up! Not much gore at all and keeps you guessing. I won't spoil you with spoilers but if you find yourself missing all the fun of Halloween, Check it out!
Written for the Mathew Fromm Senryu Critique challenge. Details below.
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Lamar Wiggins
Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, mystery, true crime, horror, humor, fantasy and poetry.
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Comments (13)
You've almost convinced me to watch a horror movie (me, a horror-phobe!) The concept is intriguing and the poem supports plenty of testimonials from adherents that unequivocally concur 😁
I saw this show and was truly surprised at the actual depth mixed in with the horror. I saw a detective show (watch many and they jumble together) that was similar to this serial killer.
It's a movie? Never heard of it, but will check it out. Weed, haha.
Black Phone was SO good! I am a horror movie addict- but find myself un-impressed with most as of late- specifically remakes. I know Black Phone isn't brand new- but it is really really good for a more current film!
I haven't watched many movies lately. I'll check it out.
Good one Lamar. I've gotta check this film out. Sounds interesting.
I enjoyed this movie a lot! Definitely worth the watch! Loved your subtitle and Senryu!
A horror with a thumb up? Interesting.
I didn’t like it much like a two stars out of five. It felt like a short movie so I didn’t get my money’s worth in the theatre! 😁
We liked it, too. Never see the star's face!
Great! You ruined the ending for me. lol Fine job on this one!
Can't say much. I haven't seen it. I love your creative subtitle.
I am very curious about this one...