Give me your love
Hot hot heat
Give me your love
Do not go bad
Do not go sour
Do not stop
Do not shop
Do not full of choc
Do not full of jam
Do not give me half
Do not go bad
Do not go sour
Do not let me down
Do not give me up
Do not say it when you don't mean it
Do not say it just to say it
Do not love me just for fun
Love me for me
Lips on lips
Hips on hips
Kiss me
Push and pull with me
Roll and turn with me
Do not give up on me
Give me your love
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Thanks for reading!
So...as probably my last entry in the Short and Sweet Challenge, I did something a little differently. I smashed a few fragments of ideas for other poems and created this lovely abomination. I am quite pleased with the results.
For other entries, take a look at these things:
You can also, if you want, look at the rest of my work right here.
About the Creator
Paul Stewart
Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.
The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection out now!
Streams and Scratches in My Mind coming soon!
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Expert insights and opinions
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The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
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Comments (8)
''do not say it just to say it'' my favorite line.....amazing work as always!
Do not say it when you don't mean it. That line was my favourite! I think your lovely abomination was brilliant!
LOL @ โlovely abomination.โ Like a Fluffernutter sandwich, huh? So sweet.
I love it ๐๐ฉ
And once I have said this, may I understand that such love should be requited.
Paul, I enjoyed your "lovely abomination." ๐
Very well done, Paul. You should be pleased.
Great job โค๏ธ๐๐ฏ๐๐ DO NOT STOP WRITING ๐ โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐