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The Rising Sun

A poem on feelings

By Lokesh BurmanPublished about a year ago 1 min read
The Rising Sun a symbol of Rising Hopes

I miss those days

when I was in my dreams.

A multistore of happiness

dejection and solitary together.

The days of struggle protected me

gave me a right direction.

A stamina to fight,

all were beholders and spectators.

While I alone was rowing the

boat of my sufferings.

Some encouraged me

while some remained indifferent.

But more of others waited

to watch the climax.

Ultimately I overcome,

and they still are watching.

The rising sun of my life.

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Lokesh Burman

Dear readers, I am here to make you feel good. If you come on this platform, you will rejoice your life and will learn the new aspects of life. come and let us celebrate the new session.

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  • Alyssa wilkshoreabout a year ago

    So so amazing .i love your content and subscribed. Kindly reciprocate by subscribing to me also . thank you and keep it up

  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    So fascinating

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