The Tomato Song Take 2
My funny song. Hope it makes you laugh š¤
The Tomato Song
The Tomato Song
Once I went walking with my brother Tim.
Somebody threw a tomato at him.
Now tomatoes are soft and they canāt break oneās skin,
But this bugger didāit was wrapped in a tin.
The above is not my poetry or song. Me and my mam used to sing it when I was little. However below is my take on It lol
Tomato Trouble Song take 2 by Marie381Uk
We strolled through the market, me and old Tim,
Laughing at dogs and the folks looking grim.
Out from a shadow, a missile took flight,
Splat! went the tin with a terrible bite.
Tomatoes are gentle, or so people claim,
But this one was angry and aiming for fame.
It clanged off his forehead, a dent in the day.
Who chucks a whole tin? Who raised them that way?
Tim didnāt cry, just rubbed at his crown,
While I chased the culprit clear out of town.
A lesson was learned, and itās plain to begin:
Donāt trust a tomato thatās packed in a tin.
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Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mindā¤ļø
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Comments (4)
A song from the heart and quite a good rhythm to it as well. It seems this could be a song funny type song having fun with a sibling. Great job.
impressive.....
Sorry š„²what an experience š
Lol, thanks for putting a smile on my face! I'll never look at tinned tomatos the same again!