Till Death Do Us… What Did You Mean?
A direct confrontation of marriage vows and the weight they carry, this poem questions what commitment truly means when promises begin to unravel.

This poem is about marriage and broken promises.
You said, “Till death do us part.”
I want to know what you meant.
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Did you mean until it became inconvenient?
Did you mean until I disagreed with you?
Did you mean until loving me required effort?
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We stood in front of witnesses.
We repeated the words clearly.
We agreed to permanence.
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There was no confusion in the language.
You promised commitment.
You promised loyalty.
You promised to remain when things became difficult.
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Now I am asking a direct question.
When you said those words,
were they a vow or a performance?
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Marriage is not a slogan.
It is not a decorative sentence for a ceremony.
It is a legal and emotional contract.
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When you withdraw affection without explanation,
when you threaten to leave during every conflict,
when you betray trust and call it a mistake,
you contradict what you promised.
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“Till death do us part” does not mean
“until I am bored.”
It does not mean
“until I find someone easier.”
It does not mean
“until I feel criticized.”
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It means commitment until one of us dies.
That is the definition.
If you did not intend that level of commitment,
you should not have said the words.
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This poem is not about romance.
It is about accountability.
I am not asking for perfection.
I am asking for consistency.
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If we are still alive,
then the vow is still active.
So I am asking you plainly:
When you said, “Till death do us part,”
what did you mean?
About the Creator
Lori A. A.
Teacher. Writer. Tech Enthusiast.
I write stories, reflections, and insights from a life lived curiously; sharing the lessons, the chaos, and the light in between.


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