Times I’ve Mist
#2 of 6 At the moment. I am learning what is edible out there in nature. I am kind of certain this one is. Though, don’t quote me on it. If you die, it wasn’t my fault. This is for the Falling Leaves Challenge.
By Caitlin CharltonPublished 5 months ago • 1 min read
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Mist, damp. Thunder boom!
Wind rustles, the golden loom.
A slow twirling fall.
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I really like this haiku; its so evocative with so few words! I can almost feel the wind and hear the thunder!
Love the atmosphere here!
Glorious work my friend! ☺️
Full of the sounds of the fall. Like you I love to harvest hedgerow fruits at this time. I have linked this poem from my latest attempt including your photo
I love that phrase "the golden loom." Just lovely!!
"If you die, it wasn't my fault", hahahahahaha 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 My favourite was the last line of your Haiku!
Beautiful haiku and photo!
Leaves and what not falling during a storm. Those berries are for the birds for real. Good job.
I wouldn’t eat them, just to be safe. Beautiful haiku and photo, Caitlin!
love the title and the perfect imagery to follow. the haiku is a friend to you ❤️
I love the play on words. And the imagery is memorable ❤️
Love the twriling loom image
This is a beautiful entry for a couple reasons (to me) The picture is vibrant and full of life, thunder booming, rustling and falling all in three simple lines...Great job
This is even better than your last one, Caitlin. Wind rustles, the golden loom is packed with sound and feeling! And I love, love, love your pic! Good luck on the challenge!
Lovely haiku, Caitlin. And great photo.
Cool shot, I’m in to foraging too! No idea what that is though, but it’s an interesting plant! I liked your poem, felt bold— especially for the contrast of thunder booming and a Leaf falling.