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My Self-Critique of My Writing Battle Entry. Top Story - June 2024.
Now that this season’s Writing Battle is over, I felt it was appropriate to do a bit of self-reflection and critiquing on my entry. Key finding: it was fine…but...
By Matthew J. Fromm2 years ago in Critique
TopCasinoReviews.ph: Your Ultimate Guide to Online Casinos in the Philippines. AI-Generated.
Overview: TopCasinoReviews.ph is the premier destination for comprehensive and unbiased reviews of online casinos in the Philippines. Our platform is dedicated to providing detailed insights, expert opinions, and up-to-date information to help you make informed decisions about your online gaming experience.
By Angelo2 years ago in Critique
The Taliban's Plan To Rule the World
While the turmoil seems to never end in the Middle East, the idea of the return of Al-Qaeda is getting more and more popular, since such a group has a historical ties with the Taliban that reached power in Afghanist in 2021. The dire situation that spells out the fate of the Afghan citizens in Taliban's regime rule hangs in the air with it bringing to mind the global setting of the day regardless of the distance.
By Amine Oubih2 years ago in Critique
Apple Warns Users in 92 Countries of Spyware Attack
In a recent development that has sent shockwaves across the digital landscape, Apple has issued a stark warning to users in 92 countries regarding a potential spyware attack. This alarming revelation underscores the critical need for individuals to take proactive measures to safeguard their digital privacy and security.
By Gowsalya. S 2 years ago in Critique
The Art of Constructive Critique: How to Provide Feedback That Inspires Growth
Constructive critique is an art form that can inspire growth and development in individuals, teams, and organizations. Providing feedback in a constructive manner requires skill, empathy, and a focus on improvement rather than criticism. In this article, we will explore the principles of constructive critique and provide practical tips on how to deliver feedback that fosters growth.
By BLESSING COOL 2 years ago in Critique
Earth. Content Warning.
Let’s get to know more about where we live!! This planet is known as Earth, which serves as your dwelling place and is also the location of your neighborhood within the solar system.
By Makur Dhuor2 years ago in Critique
The Power of Vulnerability . Content Warning.
In a world where social media often showcases curated perfection and glossy facades, the concept of vulnerability has become somewhat of a paradox. We strive to present our best selves while simultaneously yearning for genuine connection and understanding. Yet, it is in our moments of vulnerability that we truly connect with others and ourselves.Vulnerability is often misunderstood as a weakness, but in reality, it is a profound display of strength and authenticity. It is the willingness to be seen, flaws and all, and to embrace our humanity in its entirety.When we allow ourselves to be vulnerable, we open the door to genuine connections and meaningful relationships. By sharing our fears, insecurities, and struggles, we create space for empathy, compassion, and understanding. We invite others to do the same, fostering an environment of trust and mutual support.Moreover, vulnerability is essential for personal growth and resilience. It is through facing our vulnerabilities that we confront our deepest fears and insecurities, allowing us to cultivate a greater sense of self-awareness and acceptance. By embracing vulnerability, we learn to lean into discomfort and uncertainty, recognizing that it is often in our most challenging moments that we experience the greatest growth.Furthermore, vulnerability is the cornerstone of creativity and innovation. It is the willingness to take risks, to explore the unknown, and to share our most authentic selves with the world. In embracing vulnerability, we unleash our creative potential, breaking free from self-imposed limitations and societal expectations.However, embracing vulnerability requires courage and self-compassion. It means letting go of the need for perfection and embracing the messy, imperfect beauty of life. It means allowing ourselves to be seen and heard, even when it feels uncomfortable or frightening.In a world that often values strength and stoicism above all else, embracing vulnerability can feel like a radical act of rebellion. Yet, it is precisely this willingness to be vulnerable that allows us to forge deeper connections, cultivate resilience, and live more authentically.So let us embrace vulnerability not as a weakness, but as a source of strength and authenticity. Let us dare to show up, as our true and imperfect selves, and to create a world where vulnerability is celebrated, not shamed. For it is in our vulnerability that we find the courage to truly live.
By Faisal2 years ago in Critique
Former CIA Doctor Reveals Military Deaths Caused by UFOs. Content Warning.
In the murky corridors of government secrecy, Dr. Christopher Green embarked on a quest for truth that would shake the very foundations of our understanding of the cosmos. It began with a bombshell revelation: hundreds of American servicemen had suffered injury or death after encounters with anomalous unidentified craft. As a neuroimaging expert with decades of experience, Dr. Green had seen his fair share of mysteries, but nothing could have prepared him for this.
By Gunduz2 years ago in Critique
Last Breath
My chest burns as I barrel through the side alleys, scrambling between streets trying to escape its gaze. Even in the vacant alleys, the moon acts as a spotlight, giving me no hope of hiding. No matter the path I choose or the obstacles I leave behind, I can feel its weight on my back as I see a wall ahead. My lungs scream as I climb onto a dumpster to vault the chain fence blocking my escape, and as I stumble forward into a new street, I look back in hopes the beast is gone. Behind the fence I just avoided I can see the harsh yellow eyes of my stalker, persistent in its goal, and as I am trapped in its eyes, I feel my world tilt as I fall into the street.
By BlueParox2 years ago in Critique
Story Brainstorm Exact
Dear Journal, In the vast tapestry of time, the weeks since that fateful moment when duty beckoned me to rescue the imperiled villager have woven together into a complex mosaic of memories and emotions. The specter of that day, with its interplay of heroism and captivity, remains an indelible presence in the recesses of my mind, each passing moment a thread connecting me to the events that unfolded. The ethereal memory of those binding forces, akin to serpentine tendrils, continues to coil around my wrists, their phantom embrace haunting my waking thoughts as if the incident transpired mere moments ago. It's a sensation I can almost touch, as if time itself has left an imprint on my very skin, a living testament to the trials that fate has cast upon me.
By NPR2 years ago in Critique
A new proposal
Community comrades, I would like to try something different this week. Me, not you, you can go about your business in whatever way you please, of course. But I would like to read differently this week. I have written previously about my somewhat challengingly conscientious vocal reading habits, and in Reply All, my response to Vocal's solicitation of our aspirations for 2024, I laid out my plans for readjusting these reading habits to manage my own capacity, as well as to free up more time for engaging with writers new to me. This largely involved letting go of the pressure to read everything anyone I had subscribed to writes, de-prioritising those creators with whom a one sided relationship is the prevailing norm. I am on no high horse here, understand, I am both an imperfect reciprocator (though I try) and an inconsistent community adventurer. Miraculously, my piece about reading LESS on Vocal did not place in that challenge!
By Hannah Moore2 years ago in Critique
Never Piss Off An Author (You Will End Up in Our Next Work!)
A cliché statement, yes, but true, nonetheless. It comes with the territory of watching this world turn (and burn) before my very eyes as well as your own, I’m sure of it. In my own case, I have felt story upon story begging me to be written as more events unfold, not merely in current events globally, but in the behind the scenes of said events. Never mind how such events may impact my own life—bigger things are at play and must be called out!
By Jackie Barrows2 years ago in Critique